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Real People, Real Stories: Trường Sơn, IELTS 8.5 (part 8/10)

A student asks: "How does a student who got 8.5 write in the Writing test?"

Sơn shares:

Many band 6–6.5 students try to write long essays and long sentences that add no meaning.
A simple idea gets stretched over two lines when it could be one short sentence. That may be why they are not reaching a higher band.
After writing, cover the second half of body 2. If a reader can guess where you are going next, your essay has a clear line of tho

Q&A: How does an IELTS 8.5 student write in the Writing test?